https://ohrh.law.ox.ac.uk/transnational-human-rights-advocacy-as-the-contemporary-anti-hegemon-human-rights-implications-for-the-bds-movement/ Oxford Human Rights Hub Wed, 24 Feb 2021 09:46:32 +0000 hourly 1 https://ohrh.law.ox.ac.uk/transnational-human-rights-advocacy-as-the-contemporary-anti-hegemon-human-rights-implications-for-the-bds-movement/#comment-99618 Tue, 25 Nov 2014 09:53:29 +0000 http://humanrights.dev3.oneltd.eu/?p=13764#comment-99618 dear Devarshi,
Read your piece with interest. Glad that you can think and articulate yourself that well though there will always be some margin for improvement. Understandably, your language is somewhat legalistic. I recommend that you try and bring some literary flavour to it. There is no surrogate for clarity and elegance as far as texts go. I did not entirely approve of the expression “wide criteria”. I know what you meant to convey but perhaps this could have been conveyed better. Also, cut down on the length of your sentences. I once had the same problem but have been trying to correct myself consistently.
with good wishes,
amiya

]]> https://ohrh.law.ox.ac.uk/transnational-human-rights-advocacy-as-the-contemporary-anti-hegemon-human-rights-implications-for-the-bds-movement/#comment-98440 Sat, 22 Nov 2014 18:15:59 +0000 http://humanrights.dev3.oneltd.eu/?p=13764#comment-98440 Hey Devarshi…..
Really well composed man…..i loved it..although I admit there were parts I did not understand….
Hope to meet you soon…..
-Anirban

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